A lot of dead time
This movie had good drawing and good sound. But the dialogue was so unbelievably slow, and there was tons of dead-time. It needs to be tightened up to, maybe, one-third of its current length.
A lot of dead time
This movie had good drawing and good sound. But the dialogue was so unbelievably slow, and there was tons of dead-time. It needs to be tightened up to, maybe, one-third of its current length.
The animation was tight
I haven't seen good animation like that on NewGrounds, and I'm quite impressed. I enjoyed the way you made a story without dialogue, and that you were willing not to do just another mediocre comedy. Great job!
Great ideas, poor execution
This film really lacked any structure, taking only 2 or 3 decent jokes and mish-mashing into something pretty incomprehensible. The ending was extremely high-schoolish; as if self-reference hasn't been done before by millions of 9th graders! Dear God.
Granted 2 or 3 very funny ideas, but this isn't a film. The lack of structure ruins it for me.
Pretty f'ed up sh't
I have to say that this was very well done. I was a bit lost in the beginning, trying to figure out where you were going with the joke, but the giraffes and the rhinos were a riot.
I really like your airbrushing; may I ask, how do you it? Just gradients?
Great work! It's so nice to see something new. Everything on NewGrounds anymore is the same type of middle-shoolish humor anymore. Definitely front-page material.
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