A lot of dead time

This movie had good drawing and good sound. But the dialogue was so unbelievably slow, and there was tons of dead-time. It needs to be tightened up to, maybe, one-third of its current length.

The animation was tight

I haven't seen good animation like that on NewGrounds, and I'm quite impressed. I enjoyed the way you made a story without dialogue, and that you were willing not to do just another mediocre comedy. Great job!

Great ideas, poor execution

This film really lacked any structure, taking only 2 or 3 decent jokes and mish-mashing into something pretty incomprehensible. The ending was extremely high-schoolish; as if self-reference hasn't been done before by millions of 9th graders! Dear God.

Granted 2 or 3 very funny ideas, but this isn't a film. The lack of structure ruins it for me.